This one looks really good! It's crisp and clean and I really like the Vespa. You got all the little details in there. The background feels very lived in with all the cable boxes and stuff on the outside of the buildings. The shirts hanging outside etc. I really like the detail you put into the cell phone tower/street sign. The guys curved in/pigeon toes is a little girly for me. usually girls do that to pop out their hips more and make themselves more feminine. A guy doing it is kind of strange body language. Looks great though, nice work!
well done